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Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet

Today was special- Jesus's grandson was hung from the monkey bars, staples encircling his brow. The children danced around him. Janice caught his blood in barbies teacup and each had a taste of divinity. Schoolyard singing drifted- a childs ditty: Timmy Christ swings on a noose He prayed before eating raisins Told the teacher he didn't like Dr. Seuss Said that he could erase our sins Warned us that satan was loose We killed the last lamb today Every child here hated him Timmy Christ is on display Blood is sweet from lambs limb Timmy Christ lived in the old abbey At lunch he drank holy water Swore he could walk across the sea He always slept on the altar All the kids said he was a looney We killed Timmy with glee First we thrashed him in the bathroom Then the teacher gave us all a smiley For sending Timmy to his doom They sung until story time and left him swinging, laughing about the schoolyard killing and the urine dripping from little Timmy's shorts. Indeed, it was very special today the day children killed Jesus's great grandson.

==Doylum 9-Oct-03/8:47 AM
Have you gone completely mad. This is quite superlative.

He prayed before eating raisins!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
At lunch he drank holy water!!!!!!!!!! holy water for good christs sake woman. Can't you see it!!!!!!!!

see even Y2kSlamPoet loves it - and each time i reread it, i laugh even harder.
He laughs EVEN HARDER
Now do you see?????/////Aye?




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