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To Mom (Free verse) by Brittanyy

I call you all day but you dont answer the phone, Why is this happening? I feel so alone. You pick up the bottle and take another drink, And a few minutes later you go puke in the sink. You're killing your body You're killing your Mind You cant handle the truth so you drink yourself blind. Throughout the years you've caused me so much pain, Somebody help me Im going insane. I Pick up the knife and walk up the stairs, why shouldn't I do this? Nobody Cares. I sit on the bed and take a deep breath, raise the knife above my head and stab myself in the chest...

horus8 22-Aug-03/8:24 PM
Let me get this straight. You have two votes a 6 and a 7, which in all due respect should be a 3 and a 4, but me, and my pal the 'dream' were feeling very giving at that moment and empathetic to your obvious state of current retardation. And you are calling us "mean"? Though you're the one that just went upstairs and stabbed yourself due to a lack of communication and self pity. Sweet heart, it is you that is being a bit to hard on yourself. What you've written here is not a poem it is a bloody pair of teenage cotton briefs.




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