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Momma, don't let your pipebombs grow up to be Jewish (Free verse) by Bachus

I have a bomb on a bus I have a rag on my head With my Gucci fanny pack C4 Allah, I'll make you dead. Crescent Moon Black balloon David's Star Madagascar. Half a roofless bus False teeth in a tree Baby with a steering wheel Hula hooping and then Yo-Yo. Then, I will drag my legless torso with half a head to McDonalds. For some hot golden fries. A smokin' happy Marlboro red endin'. Except, everyone DIES. Including you, Mohammed, and the fat sweaty Jews. All for a star six blue We earn our stripes and motherfucking go stupid, Zebrahead. You all be so much smarter As soon as you are all dead.

eliastemplar 19-Aug-03/8:55 AM
I am currently a Marine in Afghanistan. I came here with an attitude that I would eventually uderstand the people here better. I do understand them now. They are fatalistic and thick headed. None of them help one another or themselves. There is nothing but self pity in this country, and hatred for the rest of the world. I know that as soon as the UN forces leave this country the locals will put their women on leashes again, and all will be as it was again. I apologize for ranting. I enjoyed your uninhibited poem. (9)




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