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Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes) (Villanelle) by Bachus

I woke up to the smell of lawn Face first in the dew and I wondered why my boots were gone So I broke wind with a yawn and oddly thought of you I woke up to the smell of lawn A Native with dreads said "Hey mawn" "Saw'd I what Threepke Choadke did to you!" and I wondered why my boots were gone? I felt just like a buggered prawne A map for my grass stains you did accrue I woke up to the smell of lawn "The Captain's ship did leave at dawn" Said the nigger with one shoe and I wondered why my boots were gone? The first pirgayte to dress up as Tron Curse your filthy life of poo I woke up to the smell of lawn and I wondered why my boots were gone?

Bachus 18-Aug-03/8:45 PM
I will send myself laUGHING TO HELL!




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