SylviasKitchen31 Jul 2003

Very INYOURFACE--obviously written for shock value, a little quirky (I smiled once or twice)--but the images are not metaphorically subtle enough to grab me. (Every man past the age of puberty has masterbated in the shower at least once). Here's what I think ultimately cums through: self-deprecation and self-loathing. It's well written. I give it a 5.