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"The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" (Free verse) by david

He sits in the chair, the one that i hate. Smoking his cigarette, he seems to me like an idling Buick. He raised an enormous hand to draw my attention to his words, to his witty snaps about life, the chinese, and how wild it was during the war.

horus8 22-Jul-02/4:09 PM
this is the beginning of a classic for christs saKE FINISH the damn thing.. please. i'm interested now don't leave me hangingl




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