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The Dry Wash (Free verse) by Kitch

Clouds absorbed the Aryan sun, That lit a path on to the oceans panorama, Alone with the conflict of nature, Everything came together, Sewn in sound, and vision. A Star Clipper sailed on gold velvet, Controlled by the breaths of Poseidon, Watched by dreamers like me, Whose thoughts drift away, Like the constant sea.

horus8 23-Jun-03/6:29 AM
Not bad, and simple, to the point, and as refreshing as waking up naked in the zoo.




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