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The Gecko, and the Italian book collector (Free verse) by horus8

From the couch, he reads and chats; A sage of antiquitous homosexual poetry. Just inside Rome, his terrace blooms Jasmine. Wide open windows & white lace beckon a breeze, and it comes, and it always comes well. Books piled and stacked, but not randomly. He makes time for pillows, the telephone, and tea. To speak slow, because he listens quickly, and gives freely to all, but the geckos Paintings of mutating people, and animals abound; But there will be no perch for this gecko. Turning down For the night He reaches for His bedside light To find instead A cold green critter And you could say He was a twitter But no blow came He left instead To fetch the can of "ant be dead" Returned he then To aim his spray 'till empty can & fell'd gecko lay Do gecko's pray? They should today. Cursing softly, and almost pleasantly with guilt. The Italian book collector casts the creature out. Its poor wretched death mask fixed, and color, gone. He turns about, clears his bed, and clicks a switch fan. Thirty minutes post, asleep, he dreams a gecko funeral. In the morning, with fresh juice, he peers from balcony. All evidence missing, not a trace, and when asked "why he hates the gecko?". He thinks a moment... But then spots a book that he would love to show you first. "Some dreams come true".

Christof 23-Jun-03/6:28 AM
Mr Baba Horus Yaga, do you know that has really touched me. You know I've always thought that you're a kick-ass poet sometimes lacking in discipline, and sometimes I don't get your stuff, but I also know that you're not heartless, that you feel it and do it for real, that you're always trying to make something new and fack me if that's not what poetry needs. I know creation is your life and you've got the guts to live it on your own terms and I understand your frustration with people who think it's a hobby. Well, the best of all bastard luck to you, especially of you're going to try the sestina, 'cos that's the kind of mutant freakoid form that scares me right off. It really means something to me that you appreciate what I've done, mainly because, hell, I know you don't give praise lightly, and also because I think you've put your finger o what I'm trying to do. All power to your elbow, my man. Now enough of this mutual hugging, it'll make us sappy and moist. Go well, old boy.




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