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Tate Street 1956 (Concrete) by wunboi

Its just a simple street Cicadas drum their hindsticks The air, a furnace of eucylpytus perfumed heat Afternoon , summer ,Nineteen Fifty Six In the yard big men sit Beer,my dad, his mates Between their legs enormous plates A harvest of fresh........oysters Remembers, only nine years Since their defining time With life so morning real War days end in tears A mate was there this morning A friend with evening gone In a month his wife is mourning Since that day his loss they'v born

horus8 19-Jul-02/3:51 PM
jESUS DID YOU GUYS SAVE YOUR TRAILER? SAVE UNCLE STEVE THE MIDGET? LET YOUR AVERAGE, MEDIOCRE, LAZY,(NOT TO MENTION BORING AND ABOUT AS DESCRIPTIVE AS ME NARING MY HARRY ASSHOLE(WELL NO ACTUALLY THAT LAST LINE OF MINE WAS MORE INTERESTING THUS FAR, THEN YOUR ENTIRE BODY OF WORK) AND GET USE TO THIS COMMENTING BABY CUZ WHEN DARK ANFEL READS THIS SHIT" HE'S GONNA GO DE SADE" ON YOUR ASS, AND HAVE EVERY MIDGET IN THE WORLD GETTING DRUNK IN YOUR HONOR. SELF INDULGE ON THAT WUN-BOLL-NO-COCK




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