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The Gecko, and the Italian book collector (Free verse) by horus8

From the couch, he reads and chats; A sage of antiquitous homosexual poetry. Just inside Rome, his terrace blooms Jasmine. Wide open windows & white lace beckon a breeze, and it comes, and it always comes well. Books piled and stacked, but not randomly. He makes time for pillows, the telephone, and tea. To speak slow, because he listens quickly, and gives freely to all, but the geckos Paintings of mutating people, and animals abound; But there will be no perch for this gecko. Turning down For the night He reaches for His bedside light To find instead A cold green critter And you could say He was a twitter But no blow came He left instead To fetch the can of "ant be dead" Returned he then To aim his spray 'till empty can & fell'd gecko lay Do gecko's pray? They should today. Cursing softly, and almost pleasantly with guilt. The Italian book collector casts the creature out. Its poor wretched death mask fixed, and color, gone. He turns about, clears his bed, and clicks a switch fan. Thirty minutes post, asleep, he dreams a gecko funeral. In the morning, with fresh juice, he peers from balcony. All evidence missing, not a trace, and when asked "why he hates the gecko?". He thinks a moment... But then spots a book that he would love to show you first. "Some dreams come true".

<{Baba^Yaga}> 21-Jun-03/3:07 PM
Not precisely, but upon further review of your poetry i came to the abrupt conclusion that you were born to be a poet, and I just wanted to let you know that I've studied your work to improve my own. Because poetry is everything to me. Like the way you cinch it up at the end nice and undeniable, leaving the reader breathless and smitten, I just love that, you're great at that, and how you build and release and connect dots most are completely oblivious too, by merging symbolism with fact and folklore and love and longing and mundane routines and life. I just wanted to let you know that I'm not (oblivious), and I think you're an extraordinarilly gifted writer. Now, back to me. lol. I wrote a sestina today, the first on poemranker. It was like bench pressing a lead bellied midget with no thyroid, but I believe I nailed it. I only lost a foot digit and my pants. Also I wanted to thank you for your direct criticism and sharp feedback. I know most believe me to be heartless and cruel with my critiques, but I'm just sick, of belonging and loving an art form that leaves the artist in between the weekend poets and the greats. I want people to know that I live to write poetry first, and worry about feelings and smashed toes later. I mean, well, I paid my dues i can perform poetic surgery now and it just freaks me out to see weekend poets trying to perform a double bypass with a cracked ash tray and a billess hat. They're fucking everywhere. I'm buried under an ocean of them, and I just wish that they'd get off the pot or shit. I don't want to die an unknown prostitute. I want to belong to something. You know what I mean? Anyway, thanks for listening Christof you're a poet that i look up to, and I consider you as one of the best.




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