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Angels & Dinosaurs (Lyric) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

In the beginning Let there be light, but in the end there was still light In the middle There were angels & dinosaurs Getting it on with their star wars. [chorus through twice] And so what? If you can name comets With your, trash can eyes You know I'm used to it, and that's no big suprise I follow you everywhere like chasing my tail If this is heaven I'd hate to see hell. but I would, all for you Yes I would, if I could Think I should? But I won't, so I don't all for you. {verse, the second} The hand of god The strong arm of time It's an endless black It's a void sublime A jumbled mass swirling fast That we call stars but take another look, and you'll find... Angels & dinosaurs You'll find... Angels & dinosaurs You'll find... Angels turn dinosaurs. [chorus twice, then option back to first verse at will] And so what? If you can name comets With your, trash can eyes You know I'm used to it, and that's no big suprise I follow you everywhere like chasing my tail If that was heaven I'd hate to see hell. but I would all for you Yes I would, if I could Think I should? But I won't, so I don't all for you. No I would, if I could Think I should? But I won't, so I don't all for you, but if you take another look You'll find... Angels & dinosaurs You'll find... Angels & dinosaurs You'll find... Angels turned dinosaurs. Verse E, C, A(the A hold for 4 then repeat 8 times) to a 120 two beat or 4 beat tempo Chorus D, G, D, G, D, G, A, G, A (same tempo, or whatever)

INTRANSIT 6-Jun-03/6:30 AM
The repetetive-ness monster is here. I know you write a phenomenal amount and that you've allowed yourself to be distracted for the moment. IF you like these scribblings, then do them a propellor thing they deserve.




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