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Suicide (Free verse) by Alyssa91

Suicide I lay in bed awake thinking it's my life i'll take wishing that I had no hope wondering how my family will cope. I'm laying in bed soaked in blood the floor turning red, starting to flood it is now the crack of dawn my family just figured out that i'm gone. Now it's time to be buired wondering how i'll be carried my family is all torn apart I hope to have a place in their heart.

horus8 28-May-03/9:04 AM
"Now it's time to be buired" The last time I was buired it took me two weeks to the brambles out of my small-intestine and bear piss off of my mustachillo.




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