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A Broken man (Free verse) by Mikius

He loved her With all his heart She was as pale blossom Blown on the warm summer's breeze From flowers the trees take root But the sapling did not survive Trampled underfoot And left to die Like so many leaves in fall He fell with them (This is only a 1st draft. Suggestions would be appreciated)

horus8 1-May-03/1:06 PM
Unless you mean fruit trees. Then, not only is this ace! It's litmus!?




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