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Monday night football, Tueasday? War. (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

The tip of the spear does almost sound arousing. Just not to the French. War video game? Battle sequence play station. On line Navy SEAL. Do I see hippies? Unfortunately, not quite. Kids with zits and gum. Cool! Live from Baghdad. This is better than sliced bread. Real time' shock and awe'. A snake with no head. Ghost with note pad and glasses. Prepare to defect.

Frass 21-Mar-03/1:11 PM
Good topical, socio-political poem, Jrm. It matters not how ridiculous antiwar protesters look, I'm more interested in their collective perspective for America and the world than that of Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz.




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