horus85 Mar 2003

Don't get me wrong. I like it really, you have woven a finely crafted tale of superb stereotyping and thought provoking inuendo's but in actuality I don't believe that you have the inside lane on what these people have went through. Which leaves a bit of a silly taste in my mouth. Now, obviously i don't believe you to be a chigger on any level. don't be ridiculous. i'm just stating my opinion. i'm not one of these poets bent on explaining pointless rhyme explanations or pentametor. I am not one to argue Neoclassic from Romantic or imitation to intentional fallacy. I consider most poets at six having the ability to rhyme in some creative way, thus it's like math professors discussing simple arithmitic so, point being, when you came over to my poem and started talking rhyme gibberish and all of this other simpleton rubbish i was a bit perturbed, that is all. Poetry is hardly about rhyming. It is an art form used by god's to create entire galaxies. it is magical and should not be taken lightly by dentists or asians anywhere lest they go blind and mad. When you can write a Roman A` Clef get back to me. Durt or God of death or betty or whoever. What i know is people, and you knew very few of the people you presented here in this tale even remotely (maybe one). This is all my opinion, and i am entitled to it. What i am saying in all 'tenses possible' is don't come shit on my yard and not expect me to piss on your fence.