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Extra Strength Tylenol (Free verse) by DurtKL

Acetaminophen, The active ingredient in Extra Strength Tylenol, Is a pain reliever. Uses are listed as Temporary relief for Minor aches and pains Resulting from Headaches, arthritis, Toothaches, the common cold, Menstrual cramps, and etcetera. Her symptoms a broken heart, overflowing tears, And heavy breathing. Yet, None of these were Listed on the label. So, I wondered why She downed the whole bottle.

horus8 4-Mar-03/4:08 PM
"You are the children of the Lord your God; you shall not cut yourselves nor shave the front of your head for the dead" Deuteronomy chap 14 V1

"Has then what is good become death to me? Certainly not! But sin, that it might appear sin, was producing death in me through what is good, so that sin through the commandment might become exceedingly sinful." Romans Chap 7 V 13

"There is some shit i will not eat"
E E cummings.

Well Durt, since you like quotes and all.
I don't drink by the way i quit to start quoting Marie Ebner von Eschenbach.
She downed the bottle because that's what these kinds of 'sensitive' people are good at, but life is more then what can and can't fit on or in a bottle of anything huh Durt. No matter how many different ways you try to write it, it all equates to the same concluding dilema that being a cowards way out of a situation that requires thought not the selfish stupidity of a misunderstood suicide. maybe you should of wrote her more poetry and less grocery lists




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