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Extra Strength Tylenol (Free verse) by DurtKL

Acetaminophen, The active ingredient in Extra Strength Tylenol, Is a pain reliever. Uses are listed as Temporary relief for Minor aches and pains Resulting from Headaches, arthritis, Toothaches, the common cold, Menstrual cramps, and etcetera. Her symptoms a broken heart, overflowing tears, And heavy breathing. Yet, None of these were Listed on the label. So, I wondered why She downed the whole bottle.

horus8 4-Mar-03/12:11 PM
lol. here's your three back Durt in the form of a two. Why? This is neither informative, daring, poetically different in any manner what so ever, but overall, the theme is as common as ice cream on a hot day. You are about as creatively interesting as CNN. Sorry. Now if she drank gasoline while it was on fire you'd be onto something now wouldn't you?




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