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Ad patres el prostitute (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

At the back door of a church on Sunday. In an alley off of St. Andrews, again. Beating off the cold stink he is waiting. For father to find him a hot viand & coat. Wait son, do not yet close thy eyes. Silently, he eats with both hands faster then it takes the priest to swallow along with him. The staticy air gets more tolerable as both decide to loosen up the other's collar Wait son, do not yet close thy eyes. Underneath a full moon, but still dusking. He notices that brother and sister are sharing the same sky. Just as the fire drowns down into a dark blue expanse of rippless heart-ache. Wait son, do not yet close thy eyes. Hungry again, but too exhausted to search any further then the edge of a playground. Near the beach and his Father's Mission Bells sing to him, tonight he shall have sleep. Now son, you may close your own eyes.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 23-Feb-03/6:50 PM
Maybe because it's not a recipe, turnip toes. You think you have a grasp of what i'm attempting to do here with your comment?, but the only thing you're grasping onto is your own decrepid fucking ego, Lord Ganus, and once again, do you know how funny it is to recieve such an enlightening critique upon this poeem by Lord Ganus? of all the fucking impossibly assinine things? You are childishly amusing, but little more than that Lord Ganus./ Next time try Sir scrotum, or perhaps Baron Duck butter, or even the more stimulating Duke of Fagginton. virility? Jesus, sometimes you give me indigestion noodle nose.




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