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throw-away (Other) by mindsigns

Like an old big wheel made of rubber and plastic in a dusty cellar back home, Kind of like chewing gum and a laser gun that makes a noise and lights up some. It's like an empty hallway in the dark, a parked car with his headlights on, and when a little shoe makes you feel so younger... it's a throw-away. Like a brown snowsuit in a pile surrounded by the Blizzard of '78 Hands plastered still as priceless art on a driveway where all those dreams were paved. It's like a curtain turning off the days, a women without her hairspray, while that photograph makes you outright laugh... it's a throw-away.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 6-Feb-03/12:27 PM
FUCK! you made me spill my enzyme enriched carrot juice upon my dwarfe (gold plated) now i must dismiss him to the grotto of remanufactured hand towels. Sir, i would appreciate it if you would keep your tennise ballse off of my putting green this hour of the day it foils my concentration. 11! (the comment).




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