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Is it you (Free verse) by Katie

The candle flickers, A low glow. I see your face, Etched with in the shadows. Yours arms reach out, For a loving embrace, But no longer do I see your sweet face, Now, another man holds me tight, As I ponder through my thoughts, Where are you tonight? Are you holding another in your arms, as you once did mine? I picture him, being you, And us starting things all brand new.

horus8 22-Jan-03/7:40 PM
"I picture him, being you," hitchcock couldn't do it better.11!c




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