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<{Grasping^Grendals}> (Haiku) by Bachus

{A Haiku series} Here is your arm back. Pathetic Danish peasant. Now bleed in my mouth. Mother naps alot. Some feel that she has earned it. Yet I cannot dream!? Send your best hero! With a box of toothpicks. NOW! 'fore it is to late! I kill for Mother! Until the day she loves me. As much as her sleep.

poetandknowit 16-Jan-03/12:55 PM
What a menacing last line. Gardner was pure talent. I miss him. It is also one of the few books you will read where a first person narrator dies. James Dickey's "To the White Sea", being another I remember off the top of my head. It is such an odd technique thing to utilize in a book.




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