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Unwanted Return (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

Is that you out there? Surely you wouldn't dare. After everything you did to me, Did you think I'd just let it be? I don't know what you want me to do, But I know I can't forgive you. I truly thought you were the one, But now I know to think that was dumb. I'd never felt a hurt before, Like I did when you walked out the door. And now you're trying to come back in? Well, I won't make that mistake again.

Bachus 12-Jan-03/1:27 PM
add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??




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