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Mind of War (Free verse) by t_t_redhot

Red to blue, blue to gray. The dark of night never turns to day. The flowers never bloom, birds don't sing. Death is apon us on the raven's wing. As the raven flies it takes all that is well. Everything that was is now hell. We smile for the dead, morn for the living. Happiness, as you see, is not for the giving. Death will come soon for all who believe, death is apon the raven's wing.

Bachus 17-Dec-02/8:11 PM
this is nothing like stans rice work, so don't listen to that guy who can right a poem in 126 seconds while listening to culturally significant jazz and oops goddamnit plugging up the toilet for the bluecollar people on the first snow of winter in 126 seconds. hooray for the muted trumpet and a drunk snacking too much at three in the morning. this poem is a bit passe and bland, but it hangs well and gets the point across simple enough.d




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