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Stranger (Other) by feathers68

There is a stranger in my soul, she resides there with confidence, buried under miles of pain. There is a stranger in my heart, looking out at me, through pain her heart twists and carries on. There is a stranger in the mirror her name is dementia and she doesn't recognise her image and how she got old.

horus8 12-Nov-02/12:36 PM
you sir, are a liar...at my incredible rate of thinking and connecting secret invisible filaments to other more highly sensitive and even more secret invisible filaments..do you honestly think it would make a difference how much pot i smoked..maybe by the time your thirty i'll be as stupid as you are smart (we will have met half way) huh! HUH! WHAT WERE WE TALKING ABOUT AGAIN? ah yeah old poeople with dementia listen..karen is it? if you genuinely are taking care of old people and it's effecting you in a way reminiscent of a mid life crisis, and forcing you to write poetry about the experience...congradulations. if not. you will burn in hell, and i'll be the one to take you there. otherwise..i'm sorry forgive me, go back to your bed pan cleaning and i'll fricken send myself to hell.thankyou for being understanding, and not taking me too seriously, but i will have you know my grandmother raised me. i happen to love old people just as much as pot or sex or anything else important like drinking and making sure the sheep are safe...so. there. what were we talking about again..ah yeah..lunch time!e




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