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Psilocybin, and the Tale of a Happy Stoner (Free verse) by ARTIE

From deep within the multitude of dreams, while searching for that mania which could conquer the World, came unto man, in his fervor to reveal, a pulchritudinous smile, the similitude of which has ne'er been seen. Oh reckless daze I ask of you, “How is it this unconcerned faze?” From upturned countenance to wide swept scowl, one thing is prevalent in this array of visage, the preponderance and continuity of an enlightened gaze. Journey with me now and retreat to peace. Mankind’s zeal to comprehend fortitude and contentment consigns us to a fantasm while the reality of existence dwells in the conscript, and, the very marrow of our convention. Leave me with a decorous contortion and sublimate this manifest in trance, for I shall treasure the conundrum of this enigmatic pilgrimage to survive.

Y2kSlamPoet 13-Apr-15/4:24 PM
pulchritudinous? Wordy. Get rid of it. There's other aspects too that could use polish, and the more I think of it, the less worthy of a nine this is. The title though? SPECTACULAR@!

Just don't get all sour on my seven, aye?




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