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Song of Creation (Villanelle) by amanda_dcosta

The legato reached a fortissimo Began as a vision piano Concluding in deafening silenzio. The baton held high in earnestness Dividing the light from the darkness The legato reached a fortissimo. The sky, the water and land Dolce notes by the musician’s hand Concluding in deafening silenzio. Mezzo-forte the tone of celesta Bringing in the sun, moon and bright stars The legato reached a fortissimo. Melodic notes sounding choral Witnessing earth’s plants and animals Concluding in deafening silenzio. Maestoso hauntingly forte Adam and Eve in the garden The legato reached a fortissimo Concluding in deafening silenzio.

amanda_dcosta 27-Apr-11/2:58 AM
Thanks for the rating and comment, Dovina.

Initially when I wrote this poem and posted it at helium, I got a poor rating for it. I think many didn't quite get the terms used and so it must have sounded off (?) perhaps. After I added the glossary of terms, the poem really shot up on the charts, and so I was satisfied that it was a good write. Your rating of 8 is much appreciated. :)




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