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Windmill by the Sea (Lyric) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

[Verse] Underneath the windmill By the sea Everything you ever said It came too be Underneath the windmill By the shore You left wanting Left me coming back for more. [Bridge] But tell me Does that burn, and do you ever think that we'll learn? [Chorus] I promise you you're the only one You are my light You are my sun Yes, I promise you you're the only one That could make me come undone.

jh99 28-Feb-10/6:29 AM
Seems incomplete. Perhaps
" You left ( me ) wanting
( Leaving me to come ) back for more ". Do not be afraid to involve more imagery, metaphors on the wind, windmills, even references to being Don Quixote or Sancho Panza and relationships being the mythical dragon. Typo on " too " should be " to " instead.




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