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Smelly Scum Child. (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet

[ It appears that this poem was lost in my travel pack. ] [ Unfortunately I found it and just HAD to share it with y'all.] I am prophet disguised as a street urchin deluded ex-yuppie poet cruisin' back alleys & lurchin-- gone stupid & I know it in Portland on heroin & apathetically searchin'. The quintessential joke: A raggedy bearded 'n soiled bum begging for the holy smoke, or at least some change for cheap rum-- Always straight fucking broke. I am the stink moochin off of your soul, taking myself to the brink & fillin up this hole in my vein so I don't have to think-- backin it up with a stiff drink. I am ScumChild, running wild & strange, askin' you for more change-- refusing to, Always.

SupremeDreamer 4-Sep-08/10:54 AM
Lies about what? The fact that I spent three and a half years on the street?

If I wanted to lie, I'd write lil poems about being happy with some sex slave wife and a 200k a year job. Unfortunately I have this habit of writing with respect to my enviroment and emotional condition.

Yes, I am an asshole. I am mean. I piss on pathetic wanna-be poet hacks. But my writing about being homeless is not a lie, and that will not cease being the facts simply because you are an upset little twat.

PS: Go fuck yourself with a lead crucifix, bitch.




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