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Oliver (Free verse) by Stephen Robins

Who will buy this beautiful morning? Such a sky you never did see, I've scratched my balls, finished yawning, And my erection's like an oak tree. My straining chief serves as a warning, To my heartfelt shouted plea: Who will tie it up with a ribbon And put it in a box for me?

Dovina 22-Mar-07/2:27 PM
If it were not for your straining chief, Oliver, this could move erotically into a second verse of laughingly intense intimacy.




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