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Fanatic (Free verse) by Dovina

Fanatic Walled in a city of visions, he believed in beauty and order. Bogged in a gray slough of facts, his tongue had learned to mock, his lips to sneer. Prepared with opium hopes, he came greenly on life, to receive flowers of tenderness and gentleness he had little known. (old version 12/29/06) Walled up in his great city of visions, his tongue had learned to mock, his lips to sneer, bogged in the gray slough of factuality. Thus he came greenly on life, unprepared, save for opium visions of himself. He believed in fine flowers of tenderness and gentleness he had little known. He believed in beauty and order.

Stephen Robins 13-Jan-07/3:00 PM
Perhaps you could provide a brief introduction to your poems explaining what the poem is about? I know that, for many, this is accomplished by a poems title or indeed its content but I am always left feeling like I am either very thick or sheltered when I read your words. And I can't be thick as I got a 2:2 from Hull and I am not sheltered as I live in God's own city of London.




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