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The dancers (Free verse) by richa

I can see a henge and its stone circle of bodies, some still, some imitating the steps of a young dancer slowly retracing and then collapsing under gravity, then finding their feet again. I could see ghosts live among us colliding in the planes forged in air wandering into us, placing their hands on ours in much the same way as they. I can see them dancing again imitating shapes like a young dancer.

Stephen Robins 12-Jan-07/8:58 AM
That is, of course, genius. I should imagine you feel pretty silly buying a two button suit now. I have just torn the top button off my suit. It doesn't look perfectly balanced but hangs rather limply over the edge of my wheeled chair.

Are you the -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. with personality? and the other one is the I.T. geek. I can only assume you work in a gentleman's profession such as hedge funds or private equity.




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