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Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. (Free verse) by Stephen Robins

Held down in the toilet, Assaulted from behind, All I had asked him, Was whether he would mind, If I could push his stool in.

Engelbert Humpalot 3-Nov-06/5:17 AM
This is excellent. Why was his stool hanging out? Had you answered that I would say 10/10. As it is it has to be an 8/10.




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