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Footsteps (Free verse) by MacFrantic

In the forest of the sea I'll replicate the elegy Forlorn to bask in moon-stained tides Black's the color of your eyes In my sleep a cuckoo bird These whistling cavern winds Two trembling footsteps I will make My life floods from within What deviant disproves my place? We are but setting clay In the forest of the sea The beast shall surely play

wilco 2-Nov-06/6:10 PM
Okay, I'll buy that as a decent poem.




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