Niphredil26 Jun 2006

I agree with Ranger. Everything from the baby's point of view, is great. However, in those two lines I really can't imagine the baby soaring to such heights of logic as to wonder about "humanity's wrath and scorn". After all, all the baby wants is somebody to comfort it, I don't think it understands (or cares, for that matter) about humanity.

Other than that, great job, Amanda. I love anything child-oriented you write, you do it so well :-D