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I hate your guts and think you're stupid (Free verse) by horus8

You know who you are. Yeah, you. You're going to tag this with a zero. And pretend you never read it, but it will be too late by then. It will infect your mind like a virus. You will keep repeating it. Occasionally, outloud to nobody in particular. You are getting sleepy. You are getting tired. Listen to me. Believe: 1. God is no one you will ever meet. 2. Religions are false safety nets bent on your money. 3. Heaven does not exist the way you think it does. 4. You are being tricked every day yet you ignore it. 5. You are afraid to die. 6. You are afraid of change. 7. It scares the shit out of you to see your body decaying. 8. Time is becoming less and less on your side. 9. Anxiety is the norm, and mood swings control you. 10. You are afraid of being unloved and alone. I will love you if you let me. Don't make me hate you, and think you are stupid. Because, when the end comes? I will eat you first I will eat you from your genitals up. I will eat your face and ass I will twirl your intestines around my fork. I will use your bone white licked clean femurs as my chopsticks. Your piss, shit, and blood will make me a sweet gravy.

horus8 9-Jun-06/7:45 PM
You know? I'd probably buy that load of bollocks if you didn't read my "bad writing skills" soooo much...
But for the hell of it, let me help you clarify your
sentences better, and let us ignore my disregard for proper spelling years ago; it was an obvious lazy phase.

Drop "skills" from your trite jest, it's redundant. But if you really want to be hip, and not sound like you're about to choke an a handful of gristle and sour bitch tit? Turn it to skillz, and then pipe smoke my dick-fuzz you redcoat asshat.




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