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A Snap Shot (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

The boat, brightly coloured, Fishing, Lay anchored and still. The distant horizon, A curtain of blue, No distinction between sea and sky. The white flaky clouds Radiated summer’s smile. The porpoises jumped gracefully, A song in their eyes and heart. The sun dived in For deeper blues and greens. The tide rose, and so did my heart. Picturesque, Captivating, Wonderstruck! I wanted time to stand still. And at that time I believe it did.

amanda_dcosta 17-May-06/12:45 PM
Ha ha ha.... thanks Alchemy. That would be nice. If only somebody could help me! It's a wonder they tolerate my stuff here.
Ha ha ha... I've made huge posters and stuck it on the walls, and they are forced to look at it. Bet they wd be happy to get rid of me for this reason if nothing else.




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