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A Snap Shot (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

The boat, brightly coloured, Fishing, Lay anchored and still. The distant horizon, A curtain of blue, No distinction between sea and sky. The white flaky clouds Radiated summer’s smile. The porpoises jumped gracefully, A song in their eyes and heart. The sun dived in For deeper blues and greens. The tide rose, and so did my heart. Picturesque, Captivating, Wonderstruck! I wanted time to stand still. And at that time I believe it did.

ALChemy 17-May-06/7:18 AM
If you have a good sense of color theory and layout you can get away with alot of other weaknesses. Just say it's abstract or expressionistic. What's your difficulty? Maybe I can help.




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