amanda_dcosta15 May 2006

Bleeding Rose, there are quite contridictory ideas coming through. MAybe , you should edit it to either a love mood or to a hate mood. By you mixing the two, we are not sure what you want to emphasise on. Being specific gives you additional points.

And I really wonder who this jerk is, going around giving a zero to all your poems. Maybe he needs a double dose of his own medicine.