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A Snap Shot (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

The boat, brightly coloured, Fishing, Lay anchored and still. The distant horizon, A curtain of blue, No distinction between sea and sky. The white flaky clouds Radiated summer’s smile. The porpoises jumped gracefully, A song in their eyes and heart. The sun dived in For deeper blues and greens. The tide rose, and so did my heart. Picturesque, Captivating, Wonderstruck! I wanted time to stand still. And at that time I believe it did.

amanda_dcosta 15-May-06/9:57 PM
I know what you are trying to say Al. And I know it isn't my best. But when words flow like this one, I believe that it doesn't necessarily have to be my best, and hence I post it. Like everybody else, I too face what is 'writer's block' and am so distracted at the moment as I'm going through my next phase of life.... have to shift from here,where I really love being. Packing up is hard. Maybe I should write some thing about it. May be.




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