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One Too Many (Free verse) by ElmoBeavisButthead

One too many times my heart has been ruptured, Broken from your doings. One too many times my smile was forged, Covering up my cry for help. One too many thoughts of leaving you paraded my mind, Yet I am still here with you. Those few times of love and happiness with you are still here, And because of that I am willing to forgive, To forget, But that, That would be one too many.

wilco 21-Mar-06/7:35 PM
I don't really think I can give you any better advice than Ranger already has. Follow his lead.




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