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Iron Sky (Triolet) by MacFrantic

She adopted manners of a sort Rough, unpolished worship of the soil Pollack praise her colorful retort She adopted manners of a sort Cursed the iron skies before the court Relieved us of the burden of her foil She adopted manners of a sort Rough, unpolished worship of the soil

amanda_dcosta 26-Feb-06/11:17 AM
I'd say you've quite a few pieces better than this. In my opinion, this ain't very impressive. I wish I could pin point.




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