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Sonnet (Sonnet) by zodiac

Off-work Sundays we walked to tide pools, shoppers at a bazaar: here sea glass, here miss, here the urchin, here a clavicle of deadwood scrubbed white, bull’s-eye seastar, here black hobnailed rocks. The ocean turning pat, obsequious, eager to make the sale, held out a short arms-length of argyle, lace, some silk handwork I was sure turning over would show newsprint, whirled stains, some fakery. We walked, bored sunstruck tourists, full as moons, until the tide all in a tantrum klar-ed its buoy-bells, counted, recounted, charged the market, curled back, counted and again swept up, to end things. We welcomed it in.

amanda_dcosta 7-Feb-06/8:23 PM
Yeah guys! (grins). I'm all ears...or in this case, all eyes. It's been years since I actually paid and attention to good poetry, and at times I find it difficult to follow good poetical styles. It seems so simple when I read it, but getting my own in writing is another question. When I see something different from the normal pattern, I am always tempted to question and delve deeper. Excuse the doubts and lack of trust in what you've written, zodiac.... You'll see, given time, I'll be able to appreciate something unique about your poem, different from what one might usually see. I hope your not disappointed.




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