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Reasons (Free verse) by dancin_n_da_moonlite

You say that it's not worth it but that isn't really true. You say that there's no point but I know you were just feeling blue. We all know that you're kidding, we're just waiting for you to - admit that you don't mean what you said - I see you moping around, but you're just having a bad day. I see you over there crying, something must not have gone your way. You say you are depressed, but that's just something people say - admit that you don't mean what you said - C'mon, this isn't funny, you need to snap back out, Of whatever it is that is making you suddenly shout About the worth life, that is not something to doubt. - admit that you don't mean what you said - Okay, we get the point, you are not feeling right. But that doesn't mean you have to wallow in your plight. What do you expect just standing there, go on put up a fight. - admit that you don't mean what you said - You say that it's not worth it but that isn't really true. You say that there's no point but I know you were just feeling blue. We all know that you're kidding, we're just waiting for you to - admit that you don't mean what you said -

Angelicasassy 5-Feb-06/7:07 PM
quite good




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