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Nomads (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Wandering birds Flying in the sky so high Oh! Tell me where

ALChemy 2-Feb-06/3:21 PM
I'd like to see you get the standard Haiku down right first before you mess too much with other forms. You're getting much closer.




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