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How small, this sleeping tiger (Free verse) by ecargo

Having frisked with hours, batting at time like involute dust in a sunstream he sprawls, lolls, small belly striped and rippling like tall grasses. With measured breath, he croons of garden forays, romps with shadows, prowls in jungles tamed to hand. Splayed in sleep, his paws recall the excitement of dogs like mastodons thundering the suburban savannahs, and the transient wonders of birds.

amanda_dcosta 29-Jan-06/10:10 AM
I'll vote an -8-. A nice piece to think about. the wild cat with the mastodons. Very imaginative. I've been trying to think of something different when I came across your poem. Pretty good.

Now for taking your advice,....lol... but I did.
Check out my poem 'such is a child's heart'. I'd value criticism more than a vote. Do me the honors and check it out. Thanks.




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