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Us Sinners (Haiku) by BrandonW

I know where you are. In heaven. I just hope that You are not alone.

amanda_dcosta 29-Jan-06/4:49 AM
Isn't this supposed to be a 5-7-5 count... I see it as a 5-6-5 count. am I missing something?

About the haiku, one thing I have noticed, though, is that although in daily life we have nothing to do with God, he has found ways of getting attention...and Brandon you are one of his many media. Ignore Him more and He will find ways of making many think about Him.

Now for the next part..... I really wonder if it would be a good scene in heaven....having zodiac and dovina together with the rest of us poemrankers. Afterall, hell has had enough of them, from how I see it.




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