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A Book's Plight (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

This is the story about my life, Nay, not about marrying or having a wife, Well, maybe ‘bout daggers and a butcher’s knife; It’s just a plain story of my life. I’ve been a book as far as I know They used to read me a long time ago That was around the war-time before You were born and I, kept in the store. The kids would love the story I told Of the rich, the famous and bold Of castles and knights and the witches old And dungeons beneath the land so cold. There was always a mystery ‘bout me Fascinating eyes read me with glee A story from me would always be Imagined and become reality. But now, I’m tattered, old and worn In age, well sure, I have grown My pages have turned to a dull brown My countenance has a sad frown. Its ages since I have been read Or near a warm lamp by a bed To amaze the dreams of a sleepy head Oh! How I just long to be read!

amanda_dcosta 27-Jan-06/10:48 AM
ecargo, thanks a ton for your interest and review. Frankly, I'm not used to this. It'll take me a while to be really good , the faster the better. I have it in me, but somehow, when its worded on paper, it doesn't always flow out so eloquently and imaginatively as I want it to be. Never did prose or poetry as higher studies, have just taken more interest recently. However, you will definitely see more progress as I write my consequetive pieces...........hopefully. ha ha. As for reading poetry, love to.... but time is something that gets out of hand.

"the heart is willing
but excuses creep
to grasp the moment
of dreams yet to meet."

( This is mine....just made up.....copyright and patented, if only)




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