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A tribute to our most precious Pearl (Free verse) by amanda_dcosta

We grew up in a home t’was yours Filled with your love and warm embrace, You taught us how to live our lives In Jesus’ name and in His grace. Your word was firm, you stood your place For truth and love and care, You gave to all who came to you The impossible you’d dare! With love you taught us right from wrong With love you sacrificed With love you bore your aches and pains And not one bit you’d sigh. Yet, still your spirit wouldn’t rest Until you did your best. And Jesus from His throne above Was always there to bless. With pride we raise this tribute To your name most precious Pearl We’re proud to be a part of you To carry out your work. We pledge to go today in love As Jesus you did follow And claim His many promises Today and not tomorrow. May God the Father, Son and Spirit Dwell within your soul As you did be to each your way Grandmother, mum and spouse. And may the divine Spirit Grant you eternal rest As you leave your earthly home For the place you deserve best. We know you’ll wait for us to come And share your home as always. And, now we know the best way there Is Jesus whom you did follow. With pride we send you on your way To where you now belong. To Paradise – the Promised Land; To our Eternal Home. Eternal rest give unto her, O lord, And let perpetual light shine upon her. May her soul rest in peace, Amen.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Jan-06/2:52 PM
Clearly Dovina thinks all poemes should be deposited in the Arena of Gladiatorial Combat. I, for one, am less belligerent. I have always sought refuge in the Arenas of Constructive Criticism and Ritualistic Funeral Poetry, which is where we find ourselves now...

...but this dumpling leaves a sour taste in my mouth. There isn't a single poeme alive that couldn't be made better by referring to The Holy Spirit as The Holy Ghost. The King James Version learnt this lesson long ago, and amanda would do well to follow its example. The Holy Ghost is a Ghost. It haunts things. That is the definition of Ghost. Why would Bibles refer to it as a Ghost if it was some sort of special 'Ghost' that wasn't actually a ghost at all because it didn't really haunt things? The two defining characteristics of a ghost are:

(1) Haunting things
(2) Walking through walls

The Holy Ghost does both.




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