amanda_dcosta9 Jan 2006

Beautiful! I am a nature lover, and am almost always impressed with themes dealing with nature. I do not stress much on punctuation, but on the idea conveyed by the poet. Imagination is one of the most effective tools in poetry coupled with what you are within, and your expression in this poem is very impressive.

Full marks to you, and I'm still waiting for the Oh merry Fay - part II.