poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on My kids by amanda_dcosta.

amanda_dcosta19 Dec 2005

ha ha ha.... my son's name is not Danny Boy. so i see your point. Is 'she did miss' grammatically wrong? i didn't seem to find anything wrong in it, find its usage sounding awkard. would like insight, if its technically wrong. Help.

Now finding what was in favour of it........

- written from the heart - an outline of true incidents?
- it had message ?
- the tense of speech was uniform through out?
....... i don't know exactly what you want me to pin-point to.

and what is it that worked aainst it ? enlighten me .